Hello This story https://chyoa.com/story/Cumquest-of-the-West.12049 is the first one I've done where I think there's any substantial amount of actual plot, and I'm not sure if it working or worth getting through for a reader. So to anyone who might have actually read some chapters in their entirety (rather than skimming them to get to the sexy parts which I'm guilty of doing quite often...) do you find the story bits interesting at all, or are they getting in the way of things? Any other criticisms that you infinitely better writers can provide is welcome too. I'm aware that my vocab is quite limited, for instance. And other feedback or suggestions. Thanks!
