Curiosity Killed The Cat

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by AxeEffect, Sep 24, 2018.

  1. AxeEffect

    AxeEffect Guest

    Hi, fellow writers,

    Based on a true(ish) story. Based on my wife's friend. - hope one day to make it into a novel (less erotic than this) But this is the 'adult' version to have a bit of fun with. She was an immigrant from the middle east who had her 'awakening' to the Western way of love during her stay for her further studies.

    1) I welcome your thoughts on my new story. It's 5 chapters deep so far with number six due in a few days. I think it's a tad different than most here, there's a sense of humor with quirky characters and an ethnic lead. Anyway, less of what I think I'm here for your thoughts, Please let me know what you think.

    2) If you're interested in contributing, please join in. All additions welcome - Afterall, it's a public story.

    Story
    https://chyoa.com/story/Curiosity-Killed-The-Cat.18072
     
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  2. AxeEffect

    AxeEffect Guest

    Getting lonely out here... Come on, no love for Zinaat and Co? Thought this was meant to be an interactive site :)
     
  3. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    People tend to be uncomfortable with quests that involve other real people.
     
  4. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    And, if you want interactive more than quality, PM me, I can hook you up with a few sites.
     
  5. AxeEffect

    AxeEffect Guest

    I'd just like to assure all authors that names/locations and other personal info have been changed. Only physical descriptions and personality remain. No risk of any leaks or innocent people getting affecting by this story.... other than being aroused. Please, please come join me :)
     
  6. RejectTed

    RejectTed Really Experienced

    How many chapters have you written for other stories? You have written stories with good premises (as evidence by the amount of contributions you have gotten). Unfortunately that isn't enough. At the end of the day there is a lot more people asking for contributions than authors writing for other stories.
     
  7. AxeEffect

    AxeEffect Guest

    Good point. I'm always willing to exchange chapters.