Cursed to Corrupt I feel the synopsis, the creator wrote for the story, explains it better than I would at this time. What I like most about this spellweave of threads is the preternatural focus on the future. Marnie must exercise her volition and choose. Doing so innately pushes the story forward while still maintaining a core story weaves around. The reason for this post is because I wish to ask the creator if (s)he objected to the idea of the demon changing Marnie in a physically unusual deviant way besides the stereo typical breast, ass, or lips enlargement/alteration.
Also, I suggest working up a thread with a list of characters and details for consistency of that interests the creator. I have not seen mention of Marnie having a last name yet. I am about to submit a couple stories where I felt compelled to pick one. I googled the name and a Sean Connery and Tippi Hedren in a Alfred Hitchcock movie came up, hence I used her character surname unless the creator ends up objecting.
