Double Feature: Dominion High and Bunny Boy Breaks His Level Cap

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by GamerChick077, Dec 5, 2024.

  1. GamerChick077

    GamerChick077 Experienced

    Okay, so I've got two ideas I wanna do and I figured that instead of doing a post for each of them, I'd put them both here. Both are inspired by Shonen, particularly the weakling looked down upon who surpasses everyone type thing.

    Also how violent can I make those stories without violating the rules?

    Dominion High

    This one is about a girly looking boy called Marcus Newman who is assigned by a piece of paper to be a Sissyslut Wife at Dominion High.

    Dominion High is run by various factions each being led by a queen with Marcus at the bottom of the hierarchy.

    But he decides FUCK THAT and goes about taking over the school, kicking lots of ass.

    His rival would be John, the nerdy younger brother of one of the queens, who can kick ass just as well as Marcus.

    Bunny Boy Breaks His Level Cap

    I haven't decided whether I should make this Isekai or not. It is inspired by Rance.

    This would is about a bunny boy (bunny people are considered the weakest race) called Frank who was born with a level 1 cap. Normally it is impossible to become any stronger than your level cap but Frank trains hard and by the time he is 18, he has far surpassed his level cap.

    Frank would be accompanied by a ninja girl that is bottom of her class, a gecko girl (considered to be the second weakest race) and a femboy prince. I might make femboy prince bunny boy's rival.
     
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  2. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    What are your plans?
     
  3. GamerChick077

    GamerChick077 Experienced

    Not sure. Nothing during sex.

    I'm thinking of black comedy violence that would shock characters. Tearing limbs, crushing body parts.

    I'm not sure what counts as gory or excessive.
     
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  4. OccasionalReader

    OccasionalReader Experienced

    I would also like to know the answer to this story so that I might be able to know how graphic I am allowed to get during combat. Combat is not planned to be sexual when it's adversarial.
     
  5. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    Well, it depends on how it is depicted.

    If you describe what the bone looks like sticking out of one end, what patterns the mixture of blood and brain leaves on the wall, or a detailed analysis of the sound of a skull breaking, it might very well violate the rule.

    Stating that a character can't be identified anymore after getting crushed between a car and a wall is most likely fine. Describing in detail how that looks like might not.

    If you're unsure whether something goes too far, you can send me a message with a short example.
     
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