Hello, I'm of course TheLeherengin the writer of Dustbin Stories. I'm making this thread to get opinions, particularly preferences on which branches I should put priority on.
Ruby's day 1 paths are almost complete and I would really like some feedback on what I should do next. Either Ruby's day 2 paths or finish the day 1 paths for one of the other characters. Also of course any other feedback is also appreciated.
So I just learned that I massive fucked up and the portion of Emily's day 1 that I have been working on for the past while was actually unavailable as I had accidentally set the wrong conditions and so there was no way to actually get the option to choose phone duty. This has been fixed. Of course in order to get the correct conditions you will have to restart Emily's path
Well the newest post is the first thing I've written in a long time that I had to pause mid-writing cause I started getting really horny while writing it and needed to go masturbate before I could continue. So, that's noteworthy... The post in question being Night Visitor in Emily's route.
It's definitely a very solid chapter. If I was going to nitpick, you might consider breaking up that opening paragraph - lots of good detail, but it's a bit of a CHUNK right at the beginning of the page.
