Ella & Evan: Forever And No One Else

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  1. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Hello, I have combined a few existing short stories with the same characters into one spot.

    Ella & Evan: Forever And No One Else

    It's an incest tale about a pair of twins, and I've really enjoyed writing it. It's not my *best* work IMO - I think my Affection Multiplier branch has a better plot - but I tried a few things in it and I'm pleased with how it worked. Specifically, a small mystery in the second story, and a 'bottle episode' in the third where it all takes place over a couple of days in a suburban house.

    If anyone has any comments or feedback, I'd love to hear it. Especially any suggestions about future stories, I have a few one-shot type stories I'm working on, with one scene in a single chapter, and suggestions or requests are welcome!

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  2. Dansak

    Dansak Really Really Experienced

    I soooo love these two characters! Can't wait to see how this develops.
     
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