I have begun a story/game that is looking like it is going to take a long time to finish but am fully committed to making it a good story. The premises of the Story is the the Protagonist has to create a Harem over the day filling it with 5 Female members of his family. His Mother, Two Aunts and Two Cousins though a possible sister may be added. It is doing reasonably successful and has amassed 20,000 views in a 24 hour period of release. This is my first story and with the amount of views that it has received already has made me very committed to it. There are small mistakes in the English that I am continuously going through and removing as well as being written in a British dialect as that is where I am from. I was wondering if any of you who are more experienced could give me a few ideas or maybe even read a little bit of the story if you don't mind. https://chyoa.com/story/Family-Harem.11805 Thank you for all your help in advance, Jack.Smith
Having got through the first Mum thread (gotten her pregnant) I have to say I'm loving this right now, the idea is awesome. Keep it up!
Thank you comments like this are amazing to receive. I updated it again today and will be doing more hopefully everyday for the time being I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it is written!
Thankyou ever so much for your response. First I have always really liked your work and it is in part why I have created this story. I will be definitely be updating the story to include at least one sister (probably younger). Though it will be after the first and second Aunt lines are completed as they have both been fully planned and just have to be written. Thankyou very much for your advice it has been very much taken on board.
The Mother's Sister named Auntie Tabitha be default has been slightly edited to now be the Mother's twin to allow the Backstory and Timeline at the Dinner make more sense when the Aunt is explaining. Possible Spin off to talk about what the Mother and Aunt got up together at 18.
