Evening all, So, recently I've felt like writing here again, so I just wanted to ask for some feedback/suggestions/opinions on my story Family Succubus ( https://chyoa.com/story/Family-Succubus.9512 ). Right now, I'm trying to get the Mother and Sister-threads to the same point as the Cousin thread while this writing-spurt lasts (i.e. to a point with at least two properly fleshed-out branches that signifies some sort of end to the "first arc", as it were). After that, I'm thinking of starting some other stories. I've got a "Visiting distant family in the countryside"-story with a bit of a twist, and a Niece-story planned, with a Daddy-Daughter-story in the back of my head. I'm thinking of switching up the perspective for the new stories, since up til now I've only used 2nd-person. I'd like to know what you think of that and if you prefer a 1st- or 3rd-person narrative. Anyway, I just thought I'd start a feedback thread for my story to see what yous guys think of it. I'm grateful for any feedback or suggestion!
I've been away for a while and missed this. It would be nice to see more of this story and I might write a thread for it myself (though I am really bad at keeping these promises. I write in rarely and make 1-3 threads at once. I write when my muses strikes me and she may disappear without a warning.) How would you feel about a bit more dominant succubi in the story?
I'm actually thinking of having the planned Niece and "Distant relations" stories involve more assertive succubi (whenever I get around to them...).
