Freely used, unfreely

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Tip, May 31, 2017.

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    Tip Really Experienced

    First request for feedback but I'm curious. Link here to the story. Actually, I should have put it under fetish and not non-consent for category.

    Basically, it's a free-use story with a non-free-use interested female lead. There's a lot of various tangents I've left for later work but I'm interested in feedback about the secret location line. I'm going for a something like the show Colony with a female Geronimo out there. I've got a lot of sex for the protagonist line at the moment which I think can be further into a "hey, we don't believe in free use but use me in a way that looks like free use to others or let them freely use me while I don't really want to do it but I have to" kind of stuff. That or maybe a drugged-induced free use storyline as another idea.

    Meanwhile, I wonder about extending the other concept with more of a voyeur/passively pushed into being involved as well idea. There's still plenty of other ideas so I'm open to anyone wanting to jump in anywhere they want.