Freshman Year & Sophomore Year

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Johnrocker, May 17, 2021.

  1. Johnrocker

    Johnrocker Virgin

    Really looking for some feedback on my college stories. Finished Freshman Year that has 600+ chapters, 245 deep and 900+ favourites.

    But made the decision to continue the story in Sophomore Year. Just would love to get some feedback from other writers and readers on what I could do to improve the series or what’s working well.

    Really started to focus on the storyline in the sequel but otherwise, would love to get some feedback.


    Freshman Year: https://chyoa.com/story/Freshman-Year.30505

    Sophomore Year: https://chyoa.com/story/Sophomore-Year.35604
     
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  2. SM6Emily

    SM6Emily Virgin

    Great stories!!! I’ve read most of Freshman Year and now starting to read your new one.
    I like that you’ve kept most of the characters from the first story in the next one.

    Am I allowed to ask if this will be the final story or will there be another college year story after this