Hey there, I’m a fairly new writer, this is my first attempt at any erotic writing. I’m about 35 or so chapters deep in my first story. Would love to get some feedback and a bit of opinion on what works, what needs improving. Also on what characters work well, who you think I should write about more of. I’m aware of mistakes with my quoting, I’m currently in the process of going back and fixing up that. https://chyoa.com/story/Freshman-Year.30505
