Furry Adventures

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Nemo of Utopia, Apr 14, 2018.

  1. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    https://chyoa.com/story/Furry-Adventures.4337

    This is a story Generic Editor and I took over and expanded on a few weeks ago. There's still no sex yet, but we're getting close in my branch, about four chapters away I'd say, and when you read the story you will realize just how close that is! GE needs to do a bit of rewriting on some as-yet unpublished chapters and then his story branch already has its first sex-scene written.

    For those of you about to kvetch about how short the chapters are: that's very much on purpose.

    As people may remember from THIS thread, and/or realize from reading our other work, this is partly to prove a point: that you can tell a perfectly valid story with ultrashort (100 words or less) chapters: if you put work into making those 100 words COUNT, and just break the chapters off any time there is a REMOTELY significant decision.

    We are looking for feedback (other than "write longer chapters!": *SIGH*...) and anyone else interested in exploring this 'small bricks build mighty buildings' style of writing and the story's world, which can be shared with anyone interested upon request via PM...
     
    Last edited: Apr 14, 2018
  2. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    deleted thread? Sounds like a rumor...
    What thread are you talking about? The one which is about the one summary sentence per chapter story?
     
  3. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Yes, that one.

    EDIT: Thanks for the kick to the cerebellum, I just found it, and your right, it wasn't deleted!

    Editing the top post now!
     
  4. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    You'll find it in the Site Feedback forum and it's not even locked.
    It didn't fit into Story Feedback as it was rather a general thing and the title didn't match the story (see Story Feedback rules).
     
  5. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    See edit to post above...