Furry Frenzy

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by mack2028, Jan 4, 2017.

  1. mack2028

    mack2028 Experienced CHYOA Backer

    I originally created the story to be an easy jumping on point for new authors. That was a while ago and no one seemed that interested. Lately I have been using it to write fanfic stories without needing approval since I tend to get a little antsy writing in other people's stories. That being said I still try to leave things open for people to write, lay down plot threads that I don't pick up, write short chapters with a lot of places to make decisions, set up overarching threads that remind people of the rules so they don't over step too much.

    So I guess does anyone have feedback or suggestions? Is anyone interested in adding to the story even if they aren't new? https://chyoa.com/story/Furry-Frenzy.5204
     
    Last edited: Jan 4, 2017
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I considered adding to the tale, but then I read over it and discovered how 'rape-y' it was. Pity, I wanted to see where things went...
     
  3. mack2028

    mack2028 Experienced CHYOA Backer

    well if you wanted you could add your own threads. You don't have to share the tone or interpretation i have laid down for any of it. additionally if you wanted to you could start entirely new sections.
     
  4. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I make it a policy to avoid adding to any story that features certain types of QC: namely Rape, Mind Control*, Non-Con*, Incest, and 'Cheating'.
    *(Both of which are just another type of Rape as far as I'm concerned.)

    Your story features Rape, Mind Control, Non-Con, and Cheating, so...