Futa Warfare

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by leroy, Nov 2, 2017.

  1. leroy

    leroy Virgin

    A discussion thread for my first story. I appreciate any feedback that anyone has and what they like and don't like about it. I'm mainly concerned with how my character descriptions are being taken. I tend to subscribe to the less is more camp so that my reader can use their imagination within a few general boundaries but I'm not certain if that's the best way to go about it.

    https://chyoa.com/story/Futa-Warfare.14062
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Afraid it's not to my taste, but you have a very creative idea.
     
  3. android1966

    android1966 Really Experienced

    Hi

    Liking the story so far.:)
    As to your question on degree of character description, as with most things ( POV, genre, content etc) everybody has their own views so it's probably best to go with whatever you're most comfortable with and enjoy writing.
     
  4. leroy

    leroy Virgin

    I appreciate that! I've also enjoyed reading the chapters you've added, the way you've used the Vikings has given me a lot of inspiration for some of the chapters i'm working on.