Goblin Village

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Shibbar, Apr 9, 2020.

  1. Shibbar

    Shibbar Guest

    Hi there ya'll!

    This is my first I've written in quite some time, and I wanted to see if there's anyone that would help me out by reading it and giving feedback; https://chyoa.com/story/Goblin-Village.25766

    This story is an RPG, so I'm also on the lookout if somebody knows of any good puzzle ideas that could work with the CHYOA format.

    Sincerely, Shassar