http://chyoa.com/story/goblin/cover *bluntly creates a topic to gather feedback to his story* I don't update it often, tend to create to much short branches and without editor's supervision Grammar of the story sucks. Are there anyone who actually enjoy it? Because I got exactly zero feedback on Chyoa and it is little discouraging
I followed the priestess path and liked it. I don't know if it's normal to not have any options, but I think that path has a nice story and should be expanded. I think the placement of prompts could be changed to allow subtle variation that gives more of a feeling of control without creating entirely different content. I'm kind of new to the site, but I'll look into contributing... If time allows.
No one is stopping you from copying half of a page and reposting a modified version of it as another branch if you want to change the course of the story in the middle of some page
Yes, feedback is scant unless you have threads in a roaringly popular story. I notice authors are really hoping to get it, so I sometimes add even a few words. I see you have several contributors both before (undated) and after the relaunch of Chyoo as Chyoa. I hope that putting up a feedback topic will help readers and contributors find your story. Interesting plot angles with the Amazons coming to terms with the Goblins under pressure from the Orcs.
If I can put in my 2 cents' worth, just didn't like the killing of the Amazon gals by the orcs, https://chyoa.com/story/goblin/thread/meanwhile-18 , sorry I know it might be SOP for them to do this, but it just grates and doesn't fit in with your story, sorry If I offended in anyway. Cheers Jonray
Necromancing because I Somehow missed this post. I tend to let authors to write anything that doesn't break chyoo rules especially if it branches from some early threads even if it breaks my vision of the world or story development preferences (I am not a fan of killing important NPCs). I just consider such branches to be "non-cannon"
Your story "Goblin" was the very first story I read when I stumbled upon the Chyoo website, and I liked it so much that I decided to read some of the other stories on the site and before I new it I was hooked. I've been reading and watching for new threads ever since. I just wanted to tell you to keep on writing, and not to let a lack of feedback get you down.
