My second story has two main protaganists now and 61 chapters so I am curious to see how people think it's progressing. I doubt it will ever be as popular as my first story, but I curious how people find the pacing. There is less broken for good four chapters in and it is decidedly more fantastical, but I would love to see fresh eyes on it, good bad and ugly. https://chyoa.com/story/Hades-University-for-Men.26934 Let me know what you think. And thanks in advance for honesty.
