Hanging with the family

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Fierbali111, May 20, 2016.

  1. Fierbali111

    Fierbali111 Experienced

    Hey everyone. I noticed Chyoa has a lot of cool features for making stories that allow you to choose your own path but most of the stories I read have little to no splits and also never link up later in the story. In response to this I am working on the story above and would like to know if people actually enjoy the amount of options I give or if it just detracts from the story and is going over the top.

    Any feedback is appreciated as I am still a novice when it comes to creative writing.
     
  2. S4MA

    S4MA Guest

    What I personally find that if you write alone, it is tempting to "complete" one path in its whole.
    Don't want to make it public for writing just yet, but co-writership could help there.

    A lot of options are great. But having 6 options going nowhere not so much. So finishing at least one or two for some depth seems wise.