Hey, I'm looking for some help with my story.

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by bastardlydastard, Oct 22, 2016.

  1. bastardlydastard

    bastardlydastard Really Experienced

    So in my story to prove superiority I started a pollen about a character named Miranda Grimsmour. The idea was that she was a spy, and she would be able to both observe and influence events from the shadows.
    However, now I am stuck. I can't think of how her story should move forward.
    If you have any ideas, please let me know.
     
  2. Artican

    Artican Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    You should give her a mission, like she needs to infiltrate a corporation and influence one of the top officers to order supplies from a front business to get the agency an in to the corp's distribution channel. The challenge is that she has to work her way up through security or maybe by slipping in as a temp and working her way up.
     
  3. bastardlydastard

    bastardlydastard Really Experienced

    That's a good idea, but I won't be able to use it in its current form, as the story is set in a medieval fantasy world, and Miranda herself is a noblewoman.
    Sorry, I should have said that in my first post.
    Although, the Infiltration angle could work, as she is currently trying to depose the queen.
    Thanks for the idea man.
     
  4. gscmar64

    gscmar64 Really Experienced

    May be have her as an bastardized love child of Eleana Lenkovar trying to help her half brother recover his heritage so she can ultimately usurp it
     
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  5. bastardlydastard

    bastardlydastard Really Experienced

    Ooooh, that's an interesting thought. I will have to talk with the writer of Mark's story, see if he likes it.
    Thanks for the advice.
     
  6. gscmar64

    gscmar64 Really Experienced

    Your welcome