Hello there, I created my story High School Strip Fight that you can find here: https://chyoa.com/story/High-School-Strip-Fight.27317 I originally started writing fight stories after watching older professional wrestling many years ago. Over the years, I've written several such stories in more amateur settings. Some of these stories are entirely new, and others are repurposed from stuff I wrote on places like the old One Click Chicks forum. Would love for you to read some of the branches and make suggestions for future stories within the overall story. As you can see, I'm more into slow and steady, but tell me what you think.
Hi! It's not really my jam, but nice stories! One tip: you have a lot of chapters with titles that are just variations on "Yes" and "No". Those don't exactly invite readers to check them out. Try being a little more descriptive. The problem seems to be that the questions at the end of your chapters are pretty specific, leaving little to reveal for the titles of many follow-up chapters. For instance, one chapter ends with the question "Does Daffney Turn the Tide?", and the title of the next chapter is "Yes". It's better to just leave the default question in place, and use "Daffney Turns the Tide" as the chapter title. You could even be a little clickbaity, tease your audience with what's to come.
