Hello to you all. I am brand spanking new here and just wanted to drop in to say hey. This is my first attempt at writing any kind of real story outside of school. Just felt the urge to try my hand at it for some reason. I am grateful for any criticisms or tips. My first attempt is a story about leaving college and how did it really prepare you for life. It's going to rather episodic on my part given my schedule. But I will try to add a scene every few days to try and keep it going. It might not be loaded with alot of decisions at first either. I just want to see if I can get a somewhat linear story out there first and then branch off. Feel free to leave comments about approval, contempt, or outright hatred of my style. It's not going to be overly serious my first time out. I'm going to try to use humor to make it more entertaining, and perhaps make up for the shortfalls and lack of experience in writing. Thanks again, Eff
I would love to offer some critique: first, if you're going to post a thread asking for advice on a story: provide a link to the story...
