Hey just looking to get any feedback and/or advice on my recent story HSOWAF as have not received too many comments to help me make sure I'm sailing in the right direction. I'm just about to start introducing conditional chapters which I have never played around with before if anyone has any advice? Also, what do people in your experience enjoy in a CHYOA story? A narrow but long narrative? Or, shorter chapter depth but with a lot more threads? Currently my aim is to get to around 100 chapters at a 50 chapter depth and then just start expanding on the branches.
Hogwarts School of Witchdom and Fuckery - https://chyoa.com/story/Hogwarts-School-of-Witchdom-and-Fuckery.19341
