Humanoids

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by TheVillain, Aug 3, 2017.

  1. TheVillain

    TheVillain Virgin

    This thread is about my project titled "Humanoids".

    https://chyoa.com/story/Humanoids.13041

    The basic premise is that 1954's "Creature From The Black Lagoon" and 1980's "Humanoids From The Deep" really happened, there is a species of humanoid fish-monsters that can use human women to reproduce. And now a pair of the Humanoids have gone into heat near a Beach Resort.

    [If you're having mental images of belly-bursting like that seen in 'Humanoids From The Deep', that was the result of exposure to an illegal artificial fish growth hormone. I have no intention of actually having belly-burster scenes in the story, but it's canon that it can happen if certain chemicals are added to the water.]

    So I'm open for feedback, suggestions, people writing their own chapters, etc.
     
  2. TheVillain

    TheVillain Virgin

    I guess I'll give some bump with content.

    Playing with the idea of what a Female Humanoid is like. The story has one known as "The Mermaid". Any thoughts?
     
  3. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

    While a Mermaid can be somewhat sexy (beautiful female upper body), i'm having a hard time to imagine anything sexy about fish monsters. Sorry to not be of much use ;-)
     
  4. TheVillain

    TheVillain Virgin

    Well we don't want to give up the horror elements entirely, do we? :p

    Leaning giving her a singing voice, one of those weirdly hypnotic horror movie style ones.
     
  5. TheVillain

    TheVillain Virgin

    Humanoids is officially open for chapters from other writers.