So, I am a new writer. I just saw that CHYOA has a story feedback section so I am creating this thread to try to receive some feedback for my story titled "I'm in a story??". I know I haven't written many chapters yet, but I am planning on writing at least 100. So I am creating this thread a little ahead of time. If you read the story and think you can help me write some chapters, please help me. I have all these characters and their story in my head but I need help writing it.