Hello Chyoa gang! I'm new to writing here on Chyoa and I've just published my first story titled Innocence Unveiled. It's a taboo story where you are a loving father struggling (and losing, obviously) against your desire to corrupt your teenage daughter in horrible ways. I seem to have a particular thing about father figures. The story can be found at: https://chyoa.com/story/Innocence-Unveiled.55740 I had a question about chapter length. Are they too long? Would you recommend that I chop them up into smaller chunks? Not long enough? Oh right, are the pictures too big or too small? It seems super complicated, but should I try to add Chyoa game stuff into it? If you have any other feedback, I'd really appreciate hearing that too! Thanks so much for your time. Hugs and kisses, -Seph
Hey Seph, It's pretty good so far, keep it up! Chapter length is fine and pics illustrate the sexiness of it all. Also I would say that Game Mode is not a necessity. XO
