Intelligence is Artificial

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by SnoopWorg, Nov 22, 2020.

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    Hi all. This is the feedback thread for my science fiction story, Intelligence is Artificial. You can read it here:

    https://chyoa.com/story/Intelligence-is-Artificial.32271

    The story concerns Garth Weyland, still a virgin at 20, but having been dumped by his girlfriend Garth decided to purchase a Home Android and use his tech skills to modify it into a sexbot. But of course, this doesn't work out quite as planned.

    Let me know what you think of it, what'd you'd like to see or any suggestions to improvements. And thanks for reading.
     
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