Hey guys I am recently sick so I have some free time to write my first erotica, you are welcome to give me some advice. Basic Storyline: Basically, this story is about how a gang of criminals tries to take revenge upon a young FBI agent by fucking her and her female relatives into submission, using sexual torture and drugs. The relatively inexperienced Agent J will try to maintain her willpower and dignity despite the gradual corruption of her body and her beloved sisters. The story begins after Agent J returns to her family home in a remote area in Oregon, only to find her family captured. The location is a large rural estate with plenty of space and little help. It would be nice to see how the gang turn each female family members against each other. * It is just a fantasy non-consent erotica. Important Gadget: The Collars: The Collars are specially built dog collars used by the gang to train their sex slaves. It is used as a tool to mentally humiliate the woman and to subdue them if needed. There is a shocker built into the collar that can either release a strong current to keep them down or a B-mode that can disrupt the sensation of the body. The Nymprofen: The Nymprofen is a sex drug invented by the Imperio Crime Family after discovering an exotic plant in Brazil. It is both a mind manipulating drug and strong female aphrodisiac. After ingesting the drug, the female victim`s willpower will be slightly weakened to make her open to suggestions. Afterward the drug and enhance both the sex drive and the sensation of the victim. Another feature of this drug is that after taking the drug for some time, it will change the female body and mind permanently, where sexual pleasure has taken priority. The sex drive will be permanently enhanced and the female body is slowly changing to be more attractive, the young the victim, the more power this effect has. Main Characters: Special Agent Jenny McRae: An intelligent and willful woman who has joined the FBI three years ago. Soon she joined the investigation against a crime family in LA which has released a new powerful sex drug on the street. Despite many obstacles and the loss of a friend, her team has finally put an end to the so-called Imperio crime family, with Jenny playing a vital part in it. Jenny is a 25 years old tall (5,7ft, 178cm) redhead with snow white skin and a fit, slender body. Her breasts are not very big but it is her pretty face and long legs that draw the attention of men (A bit Karen Gillan ?). She is no virgin but still very inexperienced with sex, making her very vulnerable towards the use of pleasure as a weapon. Rosalee McRae: Rosalee is Agent J`s younger sister and just recently graduated high school in Oregon. After the tragic death of her parents, she lives with her aunt und cousins in the Oregon countryside. She is still quite innocent and naive. Rosalee is an 18-year-old redhead also with snow white skin, but her body is curvier than her sisters. She has a perfect hourglass body and an ass that "every boy in school wants to grab". (Molly C. Quinn ?) She had some sex and but is not satisfied. Aunt Kelly Garcia: The Vet Kelly McRae is the aunt of Jenny and Alexis. She took them in after the death of their parents, despite being very young herself.. She is now the only mother figure Jenny and Alexis has. She was married to a man for 10 years but then he passed away, leaving her a large estate in the Oregon countryside and a stepdaughter. Kelly is a tall blonde woman with a very fit body due to regular exercise. She has a big pair of breasts but also a flat stomach (Brandi Love ?). She is a bisexual woman with very little sex life going on and has some secret domination fantasies about all the stunning young girls in her house. But she always has enough willpower to hide it deep inside her, so far ... Melissa Garica: The horse breeder in training is the Latino stepdaughter of Kelly ever since her father passed away. She is a willful tough girl, but she has always felt a bit insecure because of her different origin and lack of blood relationship in the white family. There is a good relationship between her and her family but sometimes she feels bad because of her insecurity. Melissa is 21 years old dark haired Latina and has a petite (5,2feet) but very sexy body (Melissa Ceja). She has quite some experience with men but could never admit that she likes rough sex and experimentation. John Dragna: John is the last noncaptive member of the infamous Imperio crime family in LA. After finding out that SA Jenny was primarily responsible for the destruction of his family dynasty, he and his remaining men came after her and her family in Oregon. He intends to take revenge upon Agent J by breaking her and her family while also using them to establish a new holdout, John actually dislikes the use of violence but he is also obsessed to "conquer" beautiful woman. He is responsible for the training sex slaves in his family and is therefore very skilled with the conditioning of woman. Additional Cast: Agent Ellen: Ellen is a cute blonde girl with a curvy body and ivory skin. She was a very good friend of Jenny and also FBI agent in LA but was then kidnapped by the Imperio to taunt the investigators. She was given an experimental sex drug and sold to a black gang as a fucktoy. After living as a sex slave for two weeks, Ellen`s body and mind is permanently changed via the drugs and sex she had. Despite being freed, she harbors an anger against agent J for not having the same experience. Mr. Hyde: Mr Hyde is a perverted old man and neighbor of the Agent J`s family across a large corn field. He is rude, horny and an alcoholic that his neighbor dislikes very much. In earlier days He has tried more than once to "get close" to his stunning neighbour girls but never succeed, leaving him obsessed with them. Despite being quite old and disgusting, he is very skilled in fucking woman due to his constantly employment of hookers in his house. Susy Lee: Susy is an Asian girl and best friend of Rosalee. She often visits her family and stays the night.
I hope your feeling better kinkyboy. Sounds like the kind of story i love to read and can hardly wait to read it!
It sounds like a fun story idea, and I can see that you've already put a lot of thought into this. I'll look forward to reading it when it's ready.
One thing you may want is a male character to add to the suffering the family has. It could be a male agent there with her (a boyfriend) or a brother but maybe the uncle which can also be made into forced incest relationships. I think having a character watch the others suffer can be useful if people want to take the same story but from different perspectives. Otherwise it sounds like a great idea.
Nice idea addition, i forgot to ask for an incest element. Not only would it help another perspective but you could turn it into a stand alone story' told to a psychiatrists through flashback segments!
Plus you could have the villains with different views about the incest: one who doesn't care for it but finds it hot is good to contrast with a pure sadist. Like I said, more ways to write the story you want and more flexibility for other writers to work with the same characters.
