Hello, thank you for having a look in this thread. Here is the link to the story https://chyoa.com/story/Jessica’s-choices-prison.9266 Firstly I would like to acknowledge the amount of views and likes that my story has achieved so far. I’ve created this to try and get a steer on how I think and you all think my story is developing, how do you think it should develop? Any ideas? Should there be more dialogue / character building? This is my forth story in the series of Jessica’s Choices and a branch from the main story line when she is taken to prison, I have a lot of ideas on where to take it but I’m struggling to find time to sit down and write so I thought I’d just take the time to thank people first and see how you think it is going and what you think of it so far? Thank you
So the Small fat man with a lust for breast milk wins then I think I secretly wanted him in this story anyway, I enjoyed writing about him in the other ‘Forced’ story and the good thing is he hasn’t met Jessica yet in this story so I can have another go at introducing them. I would just like to thank everyone again for the positive feedback I’ve received on this story, I think it could be more successful than my first one.
