Justice League: Mask of the Beast.

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by gorel29, Mar 21, 2019.

  1. gorel29

    gorel29 Experienced

    Hello, this story was kinda inspired by the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy episode where they placed a mask of the beast on Mandy to punish her for not being nice, every time she wasn't, her humanity slipped away and she would turn into a monster.

    That plan backfired REAL quick!

    So pretty much the heroes are all wearing the mask which can't come off unless they are too nice and sweet for the mask to stay on. As for the others... Expect some kaiju-sized jerks who used to be super heroes.

    Any feedback is welcome.

    https://chyoa.com/story/Mask-of-the-Beast.20891
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    It's interesting, but, IDK, SUPES gets off way too easy, and OMG The DARK KNIGHT should struggle with it...
     
  3. gorel29

    gorel29 Experienced

    The story is just beginning :) Besides, I wanted to show what the masks do to someone who is naturally bad tempered first.
     
  4. gorel29

    gorel29 Experienced

    I plan on breaking the story up into three arcs: First arc is the group of heroes with bad attitudes who go from grumpy to monster, the second arc is when people are seduced into trying the masks after finding out how dangerous they are, the third is when the monsterized league go city invading.
     
  5. gorel29

    gorel29 Experienced

    First arc is reaching its peak. I've been planning it where Superman, Batman and Wonder Woman would be forced to wear the masks to stop the pack, but the results leads a dangerous slope for them to deal with.