Labyrinth Adventures

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Stormrunner, Oct 4, 2015.

  1. Stormrunner

    Stormrunner Virgin

    Hi, I am working on a new storyline which you can find here, http://chyoa.com/story/labyrinth-adventures/cover
    The idea is that you are trapped in a labyrinth with a hot celebrity. Please leave any feedback concerning my English or the storyline or if you have an idea on how the story should develop.
    Thanks!
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Don't use living people as fodder for your fantasies without their permission.