Latina Exposed at the Park

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by davidteas, Jan 3, 2022.

  1. davidteas

    davidteas Virgin

    Hey there,

    I'm new to this place and wanted some feedback on this story: https://chyoa.com/story/Latina-Exposed-at-the-Park.41103

    I'm not sure where to take the story next. I could possibly add a third branch but I'm not sure about that either. Suggestions welcome (within the world I've built so far).

    If anyone here has read it, can you let me know what you liked or disliked? I'm pretty happy with it but feedback is always helpful.

    Thanks!