So, this is my first attempt at interactive erotica, i would really appreciate some feedback on it, positive or negative, either way i will benefit from it. And please, abstain to making statements like "Interesting" or "shit", i would really like if you could describe our felling on the story, characters and such. And thanks for providing this awesome platform to share erotic stories. EDIT Ops, forgot the link to the story: https://chyoa.com/story/adventures-of-lina/cover Edit2 Before you ask, this old guy on my avatar is Gotlob Frege, search about him on google.
Nope, you did it all right Also check the "feedback" tab under "manage stories" too see if someone commented directly in the story pages. The site is still in its early stages so consider there won't be too much activity.