Lina the Huntress

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Krictic, Sep 23, 2014.

  1. Krictic

    Krictic Virgin

    So, this is my first attempt at interactive erotica, i would really appreciate some feedback on it, positive or negative, either way i will benefit from it.

    And please, abstain to making statements like "Interesting" or "shit", i would really like if you could describe our felling on the story, characters and such.

    And thanks for providing this awesome platform to share erotic stories.

    EDIT
    Ops, forgot the link to the story:
    https://chyoa.com/story/adventures-of-lina/cover

    Edit2
    Before you ask, this old guy on my avatar is Gotlob Frege, search about him on google.
     
    Last edited: Sep 23, 2014
  2. Krictic

    Krictic Virgin

    Did i posted on the wrong place? im not sure.

    If anyone can help me with this i would be glad.
     
  3. Mr.B.

    Mr.B. Moderator

    Nope, you did it all right :)
    Also check the "feedback" tab under "manage stories" too see if someone commented directly in the story pages.

    The site is still in its early stages so consider there won't be too much activity.
     
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  4. Krictic

    Krictic Virgin

    I understand.

    Thanks! :)