Lisa - Highschool Life

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by moonlight, Jul 8, 2016.

  1. moonlight

    moonlight Virgin

    https://chyoa.com/story/Lisa.8989

    Hello everyone,
    I started the story above around 2 months ago. It is a fictional story about a schoolgirl. The main plot is about the protagonist and some other students getting blackmailed into some sort of fuck contest. You can't take the story too seriously and writing it I usually have a big grin on my face. Overall the story seems well received at the moment and sometimes people also text me with some enrouraging feedback.

    I am especially happy that there are also some contributions from other authors. Well, I hope people might find the time to take a look if they've never read about the story before. Any feedback would be welcome, especially constructive critics as I try to set up a consistent world. Any authors contributing to the story ae very welcome ^_^