Hi all, I began working of the story Game of Eternals. You probably notice that Englis is not my native language so I'm looking for someone who is willing to check the grammar and correct it and ajust the writting to something better. At the same occasion if anyone as some ideas where the story goes I'm open to all suggestion and if eager to read you if you want to post new thread in the story. Thanks in advance to all the writter here.
A link for the curious. http://chyoa.com/story/game-of-eternals/cover Game of Eternals Powerful eternal beings test young mortals to see if they are worth their protection Five friends on their way to camping are teleported in another world where powerful beings put them to the test.
