I've started a story but it feels a bit wooden I'm looking for someone to help "bring it to life" a bit better as I struggle with aspects of writing due to my dyslexia. Eg coherence and dialogue, If you are interested please hit me with a DM and I will talk about what I want from the story and how to improve it. If I like your work I'll probably give you the ability to do it yourself. Here is a link to the ideas page of the story https://chyoa.com/chapter/Ideas-page.1171657
