Memories of Bounty Hunter (illustrated story)

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by majus, Jun 30, 2016.

  1. majus

    majus CHYOA Guru

    Hey there everyone,

    Story:

    'Memories of Bounty Hunter' (https://chyoa.com/story/Memories-of-Bounty-Hunter.8692).

    A story about old bounty hunter, reminiscing his many bounties.

    There is no set genre, so story of each bounty can be something else – fantasy, sci-fi, noir, even romance, if you manage. Even the gender of the Bounty Hunter, is not set. You can give him/her any abilities, background and looks, you want.

    It's my first approach to illustrated story. The idea is that every thread has at least one illustration – if that's not possible, every second one.

    The other condition, is that the conclusion of each chase must end with success for bounty hunter (it usually means delivery of the bounty, but if you manage to cheat it, and make it like Bounty Hunter delivered his/her pray - OK).

    So, I’m looking for contributors and ideas for bounty stories.

    Also, if you have a problem or are lazy, I can make you a bounty poster:)
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I expected better from You Majus.
     
  3. majus

    majus CHYOA Guru

    The story had MANY illustrations.
    But then the site where I kept all the pictures was taken down and I lost all of the pictures.
    So yeah, now it's pretty much, half of the story...
    :(
     
  4. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Not that, the non-con aspect. This is not what I typically see from you, and, I have to say: I was quite disappointed.