My Step-Mom Millie

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by rumppumper, Jan 12, 2017.

  1. rumppumper

    rumppumper Virgin

    Hello there fellow writers! :)

    Have been working on two stories featuring my heroine Millie Smith where the reader follows the protagonist Matt's adventures as well as misadventures trying to get her into bed.

    The two stories are my first one called Big Tits Millie (which I now realise was too ambitious of an undertaking with too many options) and my second one called My Step-Mom Millie which is more contained and manageable to write.

    Both stories are over the 1 million mark by now which I am delighted about, and have really enjoyed the contributions of other writers to the story. Have been "working" with the Millie Smith character for over a year now, so when other writers "borrow" her and add their own chapters it gives me a voyeuristic/wife swapping feel almost... :)

    Would love to hear what others like/dislike about the Millie Smith stories, ideas, and so on so am looking forward to hearing the thoughts of others.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Links, and it please you?