Hi, all, this is the story feedback thread for My Wife, His Girlfriend which you can read here: https://chyoa.com/story/My-Wife,-His-Girlfriend.32252 I'd like to hear what you all think of it. Any general thoughts, ideas on how it could be improved or suggestions of where you want the story to go are welcome. I should say that I've set up the game mode, but there's no conditions yet, but I envision using those later. Right now it feels quicker to write the story and get it out as is. Thanks.
New chapter posted https://chyoa.com/chapter/Date,-No-Sex.839091 I said this in the chapter but I think it bares repeating. I'll be updating the branches that get the most likes first. I will eventually get around to updating everything, but it just might take a bit longer if a certain branch seems unpopular. But I appreciate everyone who has been reading, liking and bookmarking this story so far.
Another new chapter posted https://chyoa.com/chapter/No-Date.839195 Any and all feedback appreciated.
Never posted before but had to hop in & say I'm really looking to forward to more chapters. Great work so far, keep it up!
Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it. I hope you enjoy this new chapter too. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Ariana-at-home.839277
Another new chapter posted. This one is in a different branch where he didn't show pictures of his wife to his best friend. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Stand-your-Ground.839246
The 'Ariana at home' chapter has been updated with if statements to reflect the Sex Date, Date and No Date options from the conversation with Matt. The Sex Date option is default, so if you want to see the changes for Date and No Date please use the Game Mode. The Lie, Trick Her and Tell her the Truth options are locked out unless you're following the Sex Date path for now, but I'll update those soon. Please let me know if you notice any errors or inconsistencies, thanks.
The story is set to moderated. Anyone can add chapters, but SnoopWorg has to approve them before they become visible.
