Naruto: Opportunities

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by MCSexuality, Aug 9, 2016.

  1. MCSexuality

    MCSexuality Guest

    So, my first ever eroitca story, really. I consider this to be a very big baby step. I don't really have an awesome writing style, sure. But I do my best to make things interesting.

    The basic premise is that the choices you make lands you towards different opportunities to have fun with gals from the Naruto universe, hence, the title.

    Please let me know if you have any suggestions. Also, assistance by writing chapters will be GREATLY appreciated, Let me know how I should improve the story. Cheers. :)

    https://chyoa.com/story/Naruto:-Opportunities.9538
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Much too much non-consent for my taste...