Naughty Rhymes

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zeebop, Jan 29, 2018.

  1. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    So, Etrigan is making his entrance to Lois Lane's Night Out - I hadn't thought that through, so now I'm writing a bunch of doggerel verse, but it does have me thinking - what is the community's opinion on dirty rhymes?
     
  2. Thorn_

    Thorn_ CHYOA Guru

    I imagine it would be difficult to be consistent with doing that for extended time. Doesn't mean you shouldn't try. Might make a fun challenge.

    Not since civil war,
    Have I met such a whore,
    Opening your legs up, like a revolving door,
    Etrigan, will soon have child support, to answer for
     
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  3. Loeman

    Loeman Really Really Experienced

    Dirty little rhymes, like dirty alliterations and allusions, have a place in most stories. That's just writing.

    Making such a character's theme?
    I hope you have a knack for it.