Hello, I was wondering if anyone can help with some rule finagling I have been writing on Monster Isekai have run into a possible problem I was wondering if Ryona is actually allowed and even if it is if what I plan to do counts as Ryona One of my ideas was to have females trapped with a tentacle in an orifice and have spikes/barbs that point downward so that if someone tried to pull them out it would cause pain and slight injury and if forced major injury, of course I would not have that happen (I would have whoever is rescuing them cut off the tentacle while still inside them and have them deal with "off screen") but I wanted to imply that they are trapped this way. A second part of this was having small (depending on answers small as it bug hair small but the tentacle being covered with it to as big as doctor needles but spread out) and having it fuse/root/permanently anchor with the subject. Any thoughts are appreciated
Barbs could be flexible, so they deflate in certain circumstances. From your descriptions, it doesn't sound like it would violate the Excessive Violence, though that might depend on how the violence is depicted. Additionally, depending on the implementation, there might be issues with Rule 2.
For the first part it would be something simple along the lines of "as the tentacle settled he had it grow spines facing towards the entrance careful not to do anything just setting it so that only he could remove them" The second parts two ways would be (hair thin)"I start with extending tiny needles along the tentacle slowly pushing into the walls around it--- with the hairs in places I used the spell and the subject feeling burning as our body become joined together" (needles)"I start to grow needles randomly along the tentacle pusher into the walls around being careful not to hurt the subject to much and to keep bleeding to a minimum--- with the needles ready I start to use more plant like growths in the needles burring, replceing and merging" Would something like those be good or are they against no good
They are part of the main character The main character also passes the Harkness test if I decide to use a different POV
Ok I have a different question about the rules that may start a debate, It may also get someone in troble in I am going to feel bad about that but I need to know I am going to give some examples if what may be consider underage but I need to know if the count First if someone were to make an exact clone body of themselves that is empty and when the they die there mind is transferred to the empty clone, then they do something sexual would that be against the rules as the clone body has been alive for less the 18 years even if the body is of age biologically and the mind is the same Second if someone made a clone and then downloaded everything they knew and are would that be considered underage if they got into something sexual Third and the last which could may get someone in trouble (which I feel bad about because I love the story they made so far) OmegaExplicit's Monster Isekai has characters being born after a day in the womb and then growing to adulthood be the end of there birthday, these characters seem to gain knowledge(ways for them to gain this knowledge and if those way keep the rules intact, ancestral knowledge either from there mothers or in there genetics, reincarnation knowledge with them knowing things and possibly the reason they seem to have developed personalty .... I had a another one but i think it does not keep the rules intact , it being hyper advanced learning ability so while they would be smarter they would still be underage) from no where like being able to understand and speak without hearing more then a dozen words, they are then put into sexual situation even though they are less the a week old for any of the characters, So these are the scenarios that pop up in my head while re-reading the underage rules, if anyone has a clear answer for this or a discussion pops up that would be appreciated
The main material of the new body must exist for at least 18 years. Otherwise, they are considered underage. I don't get what situation you want to describe here. This is no problem. If the characters have humanoid features in their original form, they are considered underage. (Even if the character is described as mentally adult, they also need to be physically adult and exist for at least 18 years.)
Bigdadyt3482 said: ↑ First if someone were to make an exact clone body of themselves that is empty and when the they die there mind is transferred to the empty clone, then they do something sexual would that be against the rules as the clone body has been alive for less the 18 years even if the body is of age biologically and the mind is the same Not that I'm writing these type of characters or stories, but this one type of situation has always seemed odd as not following the rule, especially this example. So if the MC is 40 and is dying of cancer, but he is also some sort of android/synthetic clone type of engineer and is able to "3D print" himself a new clone body that looks and functions as 40 as well... or hell, why not shave off some years and "print" himself a 30-year old body, but the printing process takes an earth week... the new version of himself, after upload, would be considered only a week old and thus underage? Meaning, MC would have to wait around for 17 years, 11 months, and 3 weeks before he could have some sexy times? Lets be honest, MC was test driving that new 30-year old body a few days, if not right away, after success but for the sake of CHYOA... Dr. Hornball struggled down the stairs to his lab with only the faint glow of a few computer monitors in his basement lighting his way. The chemo had taken a toll on his body and he felt too weak for someone who had just turned forty, but the look in his doctor's eyes earlier that day had told him that the cancer was still there. Hell, he knew that already from all the blood he was still coughing up. Flipping the switch at the bottom of the stairs the lights and machinery of his lab flickered and came to life. It was like a Christmas village for nerds. He needed to do more tests, but he was running out of time. His doctor had told him a few weeks to maybe a couple of months, but he could feel death knocking on his front door... or maybe that was his Amazon package? Either way, his new synthetic clone body was nearly complete. Once he had the specs, and shaved off a few years because why the hell not, he was able to get his cobbled together clone machine going. He knew cloning and synthetic androids were illegal, especially after the Android Wars of 2032, but he was desperate and after a few modifications and some secret syphoning of power from a few neighbors he was able to get the machine going and had run all the tests. Oddly enough the creation process only took a week from hair to heel-- a process he started the night of his 40th birthday. It was eerie staring at his own lifeless, younger self in the cloning tube, but it was him or rather his ideal version of his old 30 year old self. Most of his memories had already been uploaded into the system and all that was left to do was to set the final transfer of his full consciousness and his memories up until now. There was even a plan to get rid of his soon-to-be old body once the transfer was complete-- another eerie thought he didn't dwell on too long. After connecting a few cables, checking his vitals, and wiping away another mouthful of blood, Hornball was ready. "It's now or never you horny, old bastard." He slipped in his mouth guard and winced at the slight zap he got from connecting the transfer cable into the back of his head. Thankfully due to the cancer no one questioned his constant wearing of beanies so it was easy covering up a Matrix-style port on the back of his skull. One last check and a quick mouse click and he'd be a brand new, cancer-free man. *Click* Hornball blinked several times before coming to on his living room couch. He didn't remember coming up the stairs from the basement or what happened after hitting 'Enter', but what he did know was that he didn't have washboard abs earlier nor a full head of hair. "It fucking worked?!" he said as danced around naked and admired his new body in the hallway mirror. He was home alone so he didn't care, but a sudden knock at his door had him searching for clothes. He wasn't expecting anyone, but peaking out the top of the front door window he saw that the street was dark and so was his front porch. The only light was from the glow of the cell phone in his neighbor's hand. It was Stacy, the hot 18 year old busty blonde from next door. Even after all these years, Hornball and Stacy were going at like rabbits, like they had always done since that first night after he transferred himself to his clone body. Unfortunately, that story cannot be told as "technically" Hornball was "underage" despite being in a fully adult 30 year old clone body and with an adult consciousness transferred into that body, but since that physical body had only been in existence for a week, Stacy could be seen by some as a dirty, awful person for taking advantage of such a "young" person. And oh did she take advantage of the new Hornball, in all the right ways. But now that Hornball is 18, 48, and 58 all at the same time it's fair game in hearing all about his sexual adventures from here on out. P.S. This is just me being goofy. Not trying to anger the mods or CHYOA gods and get banned. Just had to poke.
It's rather easy to manufacture a special situation that violates the rules. On the other hand, it is similarly easy to avoid such issues. In the given example, it would be enough to only use non-living material to create the android. (Or add parts (e.g. brain) from the dying body.)
