Office Retreat

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Graphite Golem, Jun 9, 2017.

  1. Hello all. I want to thank everyone who has read/liked/favorited, etc. the story thus far. My hope is to continue the story for some time, as I like having the options here.

    Office Retreat <----- That's the story link

    I posted this to ask for some feedback on the way the story has moved thus far. It was my intent to move it along perhaps a bit more slowly than those I've written in the past in terms of the erotic content, and perhaps make the payoff a bit better. I'm curious as to how that's coming off.

    Anyway, Thanks again for reading!

    JG
     
    Last edited: Jun 14, 2017
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  2. Nemo of Utopia

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    Omg! Why is this not one of the top stories on the site? Anyone whose a hetero/bi-sexual male: READ THIS STORY!