Olympus on Earth

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Ulap38, Aug 29, 2016.

  1. Ulap38

    Ulap38 Virgin

    Hello everybody. Just put up the beginning of my second story on the site, Olympus on Earth, a story of ancient gods reborn in the modern age[​IMG]. https://chyoa.com/story/Olympus-On-Earth.9726 If you want to know more, have a look here: http://forum.chyoa.com/threads/story-idea-olympus-on-earth.571/. If you're interesting in writing for the story but are unsure of something feel free to ask me here, in the chapter comments, or private message me. I'm eager to hear what you guys think and if it's something you may be interesting in contributing to.
     
  2. Ulap38

    Ulap38 Virgin

    Hey everybody! Now that I've gotten a fair amount of content on the story, I'd like to hear your feedback as I'm starting to ponder where to go next. What SLs do you like, which do you think need to be spiced up, what SLs would you like to see, who would like to see focused on more, etc. I'm not just looking for positive feedback, I value constructive criticism too. This is only my second story, but it's the first to really gain a lot of views so I'm looking to make it as much an enjoyable reading experience for as many people possible. Thanks to for the views and thanks to anybody willing to share their input.