Hello everyone! I've been on this site for awhile now and I really enjoy the stories that the authors post. I'm not "writer material" so I’m looking to see if anyone is interesting in writing about it. It’s about my friends with benefits who I’ve talked with about having a story written about her. She think she it’s a major turn on. So anyway... Location- New York City Name: Jenny Liu Age- 21 Eyes- Big eyes black in color Ethnicity- Asian Skin tone- Pale Height - 5 ft 2 Body type- Curvy ( has nice breasts and butt) - C/D cup Hair color - brown/black Hair length - mid back -She usually wears black lace bra and pantisz - She leads people on and is aggressive and would fight back a bit so maybe have people hold her down -She drives a Mercedes E Class coupe ( Maybe have a kidnapping scene in parking lot?) - Shes a student but goes out and parties quite often Maybe have her gangraped by 4-5 guys forcefully and maybe kidnapping (up to your imagination) Double penetration,anal, spit roasting would be pretty nice. ( She doesn't like anal at all so that's a plus ) shes not very submissive and would fight and curse as mentioned. I added as much information as I could off the top of my head. Have some pictures for inspiration. Let me know what you guys think and thanks in advance!
If you pledge at the 18$ level to the CHYOA Patreon fund you can get this done... EDIT: several other authors, (myself not included,) could also help you out for donations of similar or slightly lower monetary value to their own Patreon funds, allowing you to get the story worked up much much faster. It's doubtful anyone would take on something like this for pure amusement value though.
Well, I'm not interested in writing that, though I might add some thoughts about it... There would be a huge difference and different possibilities of telling that story depending on the POV. - First person female can concentrate on her feelings and her pain. - First person male could concentrate on the protagonist's feelings while abusing the woman or watching the other men doing it. He could also have concerns about what they are doing and try to be more gentle or maybe try to stop the others midway. He could also be put off by another guy's cum inside the woman. - Third person observer can create a distance to the bad feelings of the victim. Gangbangs - whether consensual or not - are pretty difficult to write as you have to deal with several persons while most things happen at the same time. Though POV is also an issue here. Writing about real persons seems odd to me, especially if it is about a theme like this. Good luck with your plan, though I'd recommend rather trying to start that story by yourself - or follow Nemo's advice.
May be interested, but I have to warn I may not find time so soon to write it. Anyway, I think kinks and taboos need to be discussed. I guess incest is out of the picture (actually, even not knowing the person directly, I would feel awkward writing something about her having sex with a sibling or parent, so I can't even imagine how she would react to it), but what about BDSM, or slavery/forced prostitution. Should it be "straight" rape only, or would girl on girl action be okay too? Do you want only a story grounded in our reality and time period, or would it be ok to use sci fi, fantasy, historical settings or simply have the action happen in a place your friend would never go to? I won't go into details here since it may somehow spoil things for potential readers, but maybe we could discuss it through private messages?
I think its a hot request, but I'm too busy with my own shit to do it... Would like to get to know her a little first, for purposes of properly fulfilling the request, personality... Won't. But I get it. Good luck. Also - there's no real assurance that she's the one making this request, rather than you (PL97). Not that I care much in a non-picture story that I'm not doing anyway. Just saying.
I am with Loeman; I have two publish stories I seem to have abandoned (might return to them), so no real chance of it making past the amount Discipline is at (which is pretty similar, minus everything you detailed, but similar in the theme) And as Loeman pointed out, the friend could be unaware of this, so unless this thread turns into a Subreddit where users submit small stories hoping to get someone to roleplay (dirty pen pals, I think) and she comments and is fine with this, then you have no real chance of it becoming a story without someone using the small details as inspiration for a completely different story. If she comments about it being okay, then I might consider it, but also extremely unlikely it'd be imvolving multiple men, but a different version of Discipline (everything but the number of men will change to fit it), with a second woman as a possiblity. 2nd POV, Female, most likely. But again, she'd have to comment on this, otherwise it'd be like that one story I found on here that seems to just be a fantasy and never really went anywhere since I looked at it.
Expanding on all that - good predators frequently outnumber good prey online. Not that either, good, are in great supply. She has the power, here, if she wants it, and takes it. If she advertises, predators will swarm to her like damn parasitic locusts, rather than opportunistic, true lions, if given the signals and opportunity. I find that dichotomy fitting, and the potential power difference, fitting. But that's me. Good prey can get all kinds of attention. It will be on her to identify the story and relationships she desires - and not the other way. She has the power. Online, in this intellectual space, this space without restraints beyond personal desire, she has the power. Or - the predator has nothing but lonesome, bloodless, nothing.
Maybe this is out of line, but I have to take exception to the whole scenario. I'm OK with non-consent stories; it's not my cup of tea, but as long as it's fiction it's harmless. But the thing is, there's a non-fictional element here; you're asking us to write a rape story about a real person, with a lot of precise description and a name. I'm going to be blunt here: How do we KNOW the real Jenny Liu has consented to this? I hate to suggest that anyone is a liar when I don't even know them, but that's part of the problem here: I DON'T know you. Maybe you're trying to fulfill an honest request from a friend who's into this sort of thing... or maybe you want to read a story about a girl you know getting sexually assaulted, and she'd actually be horrified at the prospect. I know of at least one case, back in the early days of Usenet, when someone wrote a rape fantasy story about a girl he knew; it included kidnapping her on her way home from school, imprisoning her and tying her up, raping her multiple times while beating her half to death, and then dumping gasoline on her and setting her on fire. The story used her real name and described her exactly. Well, the girl found the story online, and she was naturally traumatized and terrified; for all she knew, this wasn't just a story, it was a plan of action. You're not asking for anything so extreme as a snuff story, and in any event the rules of this site wouldn't allow it. But you are asking for a rape fantasy about someone who you've said yourself is a real person; and for all we know it's entirely your idea, not hers. We just don't know. We CAN'T know for sure. And considering the possible consequences if you're not being completely truthful here, I have to not only decline this request, but strongly encourage others to also decline.
For all the reasons Xenolan enumerates above, plus a few more of my own, I wouldn't touch this with fire tongs.
For what it's worth, I'll add my 50 cent: I like a good non-con story, but everything "real life" is a turn-off for me, and I am not only talking morally, but also from my very private taste: It really is a turn-off. The same goes, by the way, for "celebrity" stories. Never saw the fun in that neither. Doesn't inspire me.