Pillows and Panties

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by RicoLouis, Jan 11, 2016.

  1. RicoLouis

    RicoLouis Really Really Experienced

    This Idea came to me on a whim, what if pillow fighting was a new soft contact sport. Two teams of four girls dress up in sexy lingerie. Before the match the eight girls must kiss. Two girls from each team enter the mat trying to knock the other girls down. If any part of a girl touches the mat other then her feet or she steps out of bounds she has to leave the ring and tag in a new girl and preform a strip tease for the fans removing one article of clothing. Once a girl has been completely stripped she is out permanently. If all four girls or naked there team loses the match. Girls where six pieces of clothing. Tops, bra, bottoms, panties, and leg wear which can be either socks or stockings. Girls can wear whatever style of lingerie they like as long as it is sexy and is in there team color allowing each girl to dress to her personality.

    The female referee carries a paddle and may spank the girls for fouls such as grabbing the attackers pillow or using any part of your body such as tripping or shoving to gain a fall. Penalties count as a fall and the girl must remove an article of clothing in front of the opposing teams fans and can not renter the match until all three of her teammates have had a turn in the ring. Between rounds the referee must strip as well, if she becomes completely naked the match is over and the team wearing the most clothing wins, in case of a tie the two most dressed girls must go one on one. Each team has four alternates that serve as cheerleaders who may replace a girl if she is hurt or to tired to continue, alternates strip as well between rounds for their fans to pump up the crowd making them less effect in later rounds if they are needed. If an alternate is tagged in the girl who tagged her in must strip completely.


    For some reason I picture this as an anime.With a lot of action taking place outside of the ring as well and maybe bets between the teams and rivalry and bets between team mates as well. Any Suggestions on team names would be helpful. So far i got the Nymphs and the Succubi.
     
  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    The scanty clothes, the referee carrying a paddle, and the notion of knocking your opponent out of the ring are all common to Sumo wrestling.

    Except that in Professional Pillow Panty Power Play, shoving is a foul to maintain the central theme of a striptease pillow fight.

    I'm guessing from the rules on winning that rounds are timed, though you could also call a round after four falls or fouls, and call a match after twenty-four pieces of clothing have fallen.

    -Z.
     
  3. Kobe

    Kobe Experienced

    Huh. Sounds interesting.

    Is this story going to be from the point of view of one girl who's new to the team and desiring to learn? What about the team captain? Or is this going to be in 3rd person?
    It looks and sounds good. Maybe if it's in 1st person and she's a new to the team, she could get "Hazed" leading to a lot of action? You could also have a ref that takes interest in her, her trying to seduce the other team, etc. etc.
    If you put time into it, I think it'd be pretty awesome! If it takes off, I could also potentially try and write a chapter or two for you.
     
  4. Beyond modifying some of this so where the competitors wrestle to strip one another with the pillows acting as "weapons" - can throw them or swing them, the latter having a limit based on time or number of swings - going off the anime idea, I could see a new girl entering this league and starting off as one of the alternates.

    I take it "rounds" are when all members on a team take a turn otherwise, the referee will be naked long before any of the active pillow fighters.