Ahoy lads and lasses! Welcome to the feedback thread for Pirates of the Crimson Nebula; a choice of path erotic adventure set in the background of the web comic Voyage of the Broken Promise. Please feel free to provide any comments, critiques or suggestions; I am always looking to improve the story and my writing. Pirates of the Crimson Nebula is a public story and I encourage you to submit threads. There are a couple of things I would ask of any potential authors. Proofread: Before you hit the "Submit Thread", give your writing a good going over for spelling, grammar and POV. Be Familiar With The Setting: The best way is to read the web comic http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Voyage_of_the_Broken_Promise/. For additional info you can also check out http://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Articles_of_the_Broken_Promise/ Follow the TOS: No ultra violence, no bathroom fetishes, no bestiality, no underage (18) sex. That's it for now. I look forward to reading your feedback and your submissions! You can find the cover page here: http://chyoa.com/story/pirates-of-the-crimson-nebula/cover All ahead full; make speed! Doc
