Pokegirls: Rippa Conflict

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by StanS55, Mar 17, 2018.

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  1. StanS55

    StanS55 Experienced

    Hi All,

    I just published my pokegirls story and like all writers here would live feedback.

    https://chyoa.com/story/Pokegirls:-The-Rippa-Conflict.14772

    I have a few game mode tricks and ideas I wanted to flesh out so there is a number of chapters and functions using that. I've set a few branches to require game mode to view - probably annoying for most, but I want to reward someone for choices and for playing along.

    I probably have too much non sex writing at start.
     
    Last edited: Mar 22, 2018
  2. StanS55

    StanS55 Experienced

    Summary

    Lysa | Main Pokegirl - Choices: Ghost, Fairy, or Psychic
    Rai | Blonde Pokegirl - Flying. + Fire if you follow her into woods.

    Battle 1 - Lysa vs Kaymite
    Battle 2 - Lysa vs Rai
    Battle 3 - may battle Water Type?

    - Item Choices
    Healing Berries
    Unknown Pokeball
    Pink Bow [gift]

    - Character Bonus
    Mechanic
    Good Nature
    Brave Nature
    Dark Nature
    Power Lust