So I’m thinking of exploring professor Trouchs’ back story, if you don’t know who he is; Trouch features in my Jessica’s Choices series and runs the Margaret Thatuals helping home. I liked my take on his hypnotism technique and enjoyed writing how Jessica felt like there was only one real option which was to obey. Granted I haven’t expanded on the Jessica’s Choices branch that first introduced the mind control element to the series but I have a lot written down and wondering how a spinoff would work? NOTE: Naturally with the above in mind, this story will involve Non-consensual pieces and is pretty much all my work includes (Not going to stop yet) So my idea would be to first have him perfect his craft, understand how he can bend and warp his clients minds over time, living vicariously through some of them and using his own perverted wants and urges on unsuspecting victims. I know there are a lot of mind control stories out there but I think my idea has its own place. Anyway, if I could have your thoughts or perhaps words if wisdom / discouragement that would be great. Thanks in advance. If any of you are interested in the chapters mentioned above.Two variants follow on from: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Back-to-her-room.333065
I honestly wish you would try your hand at doing one where you refrained from any/all Non-con: if only to challenge yourself, but: you do you... Edit: is it bad that I thought this was a HARRY POTTER fanfic at first?
And I have, - Lucky Message and Dust, granted the latter didn't really go very far and the former is more of a hobby. I know your thoughts on non concensual content and for that I apologise as I don't like the idea of alienating a group of people. And god yeah, I'm most certainly not anywhere near good enough to write a fan fiction without causing someone to absolutely hate what I write.
Slightly off topic, but I was kind of intrigued at Jessica's mother being led away 'off camera' - wasn't that in the same house? I wonder if she knew what her daughter was going through... if she had her own trials to 'save' her daughter from worse than she got, had to watch tapes or endure threats to her girl's safety, and compromise herself for that...
I'll be honest, I liked it also but I was happier to see another author contributing and would love to be able to read what kestrals11 had planned. I might pick up where he left off in the near future.
