I'm creating a story loosely-based on Fight Club with an emulated-ish style with similar characters. I'd appreciate any comments. Thanks. (not sure if it's been published at the time of writing this) https://chyoa.com/story/Project-Mayhem.16273
Well, there's...not much there yet. One chapter deep, more breaking the fourth wall than not, and I'd try to avoid too much violence or you'll run afoul of the site rules. That said, good luck? Maybe don't try to outline too many options right away, focus on a few and actually publish those chapters?
Hmm... I was planning to have it seem like at least some of the characters seem to be talking in a conversation style with the reader.
