question for authors?

I am wondering what other authors would call the noise that a woman makes when she is deep throating a guy or is being face fucked. Gagging I guess would be the actual term but it creates kind of the wrong image. Gurgling or gluging maybe?

 

Well, depends on whether you want it to be "Sexy" or "Submissive"... IMHO.

If Sexy, I'd go with Engulfing... "The wet liquid sound of her throat engulfing me over and over..."
If Submissive, I'd go with Plugging... "Her throat continued to make it's sound of desperate plugging as she fought for breath..."

Course, that's just what I'd go with, but I'm not a huge fan of throatjobs so... YMMV.

 

If there's a lot of saliva, maybe spluttering? Variants of 'choking' would also work, albeit at the cost of such vocabulary being less arousing.

 

Stifled, bridled? Wet cockstifled moans made me smile down at Jane as she took my whole length into her throat.

 

Glugging. Slopping. Gulping. It's a weird sound.

 

I tend to use some rough and fun onomatopoeias in this situation, and the suggestions here are solid for general description.

 

I definitely go with "glug" with "guh" being an occasional sound effect.

 

Slurping. I usually describe with action rather than noise. Sexier to say she licked, sucked, etc... than slurp. Lapped up if your nasty.

 

Partial to glk-glk-glk myself.